Review

Health advocates around the world say that the toxic ingredients in cigaratte smoke (that) travel throughout the body(,) are very dangerous and cause death. The (N)nicotine and the carbon monoxide are the ingredients of the cegarette(cigagarettes), this (which) cause that the cell blood (cells) can´t(not to be able to) carrying(carry) a full load of oxygen. The real effects of smoking depends(depend) of(on) the person(´s) (what?); it will also depend on the number of cogarette(s) a person smokes per day, the age when the person first started to smoke, and the number of years the person has been smoking. The act for(of) smoking don´t(doesn´t) really kills(kill) you; however the smoke cigars (emit) affect(affects) your immune system and may increase the risk for respiratory and other infections. Other effects that aren´t much dangerous is yellowish stain on the smoker´s fingers and teeth. When you start smoking there are immediate effects; begin the real problems (not immediate but strong enoguh to) that cause the death. Emphysema is an illness that slowly rots your lungs then you die. And (O)other long effect(s) is(are) defferet(different) kinds of cancers(,) like lung, mouth, (and)stomach (cancer), etc. (and) (r)Respiratory tract infections like pneumania and chronic bronchitis. These are examples of the (irresversible) effects (of smoking) that can kill you and they are irreversible. The toxic ingredients in cigaratte smoke are dangerous and cause the death (those around you;)that is whay(why) (now) the cigarette it´s(is) banned in many places

The Effects of Smoking (Writing 1)

Health advocates around the world say that the toxic ingredients in cigaratte smoke travel throughout the body are very dangerous and cause death. The nicotine and the carbon monoxide are the ingredients of the cegarette, this cause that the cell blood can´t carrying a full load of oxygen. The real effects of smoking depends of the person; it will also depend on the number of cogarette a person smokes per day, the age when the person first started to smoke, and the number of years the person has been smoking. The act for smoking don´t really kills you; however the smoke cigars affect your immune system and may increase the risk for respiratory and other infections. Other effects that aren´t much dangerous is yellowish stain on the smoker´s fingers and teeth. When you start smoking there are immediate effects; begin the real problems that cause the death. Emphysema is an illness that slowly rots your lungs then you die. And other long effect is defferet kinds of cancers like lung, mouth, stomach, etc. Respiratory tract infections like pneumania and chronic bronchitis. These are examples of the effects that can kill you and they are irreversible. The toxic ingredients in cigaratte smoke are dangerous and cause the death that is whay the cigarette it´s banned in many places.

Writing 1

Write a paragraph about the effects of smoking.

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