Writing Activity 3

Write a paragraph describing a cellular phone.

Correction 1: Writing Activity 2

Teenagers are affected by psychological and physical aspects in decision making. The psychological aspects that affect the teenagers are curiosity and rebellion. The rebellion of the teenagers happens because they think that they know all the things and that they have the reason. But the truth is that they don´t know how the real world is. They can make bad decisions because they think that they are prepared; they think that they are people with experience. They can make bad choices that will mark their lives for ever like the decision to consume drugs or to make a tattoo, or the sex thing, the teenagers think that they are prepared to have a girlfriend and have sex, but they don´t know the consequence of having sex and the responsibility it conveys. The sex is related with the physical aspects that the teenagers deal. In this phase they will feel sexual attraction for other persons and this is because the hormones are developing so teenagers will need to have a good education to fight with this. There are other physical aspects like the height and the muscle mass. For this two aspect teenagers think that they are prepared to face big situations and responsibilities, but they aren´t and they will make mistakes in the decision making. So the teeagers need to be prepared for the physical and psychological aspects that will affect them in their decision decisions to taking.

Review

The teenagers(Teenagers) are affected by physical and psychological aspects in decision making.
(This is controlling idea 2, where is controlling idea 1?)The psychological aspects that affect the teenagers is(are) that the teenagers are going through a phase of trying new things (curiosity) and rebellion.
(This is controlling idea 2.2, where is controlling idea 2.1?) The rebellion of the teenagers are(happens) because they think that they know all the things and that they have the reason. But the tru(truth) is that they don´t know how the real world is. They can make bad decisions because they think that (they) are prepared(;) they think that (they) are people with experience. They can make bad choises(choices) that will mark his(their) life(lives) for ever like the desicion(decision) to consum(consume) drugs or to make a tatto(tattoo), or the sex thing, the teeagers(teenagers) think that they are preparated(prepared) to have a girfriend(girlfriend) and have sex, but they don´t know the consecuence(consequence) of having sex and the responsability(responsibility it conveys). The sex is related with the physical aspects that the teenagers deal. In this phase they will feel sexual atraction(attraction) for other persons and this is because the hormones are developing so the teeagaer(teenagers) will need to have a good education to fight whith(with) this. (This is controlling idea 1)There are other physical aspects like the height and the muscle mass. For this too(two) aspects the teeager(teenagers) think that they are prepared to face big situations and responsabilities(responsibilities), but (they) aren´t and they would(will) make mistakes in the decision making.(/I think this needs more explanation.) So the teeagers needs(need) to be prepared to(for) the physical and psychological aspects that will affect (them) in the(their decision) decisions to take(taking).

Writing Activity 2

The teenagers are affected by physical and psychological aspects in decision making. The psychological aspects that affect the teenagers is that the teenagers are going through a phase of trying new things and rebellion. The rebellion of the teenagers are because they think that they know all the things and that they have the reason. But the tru is that they don´t know how the real world is. They can make bad decisions because they think that are prepared they think that are people with experience. They can make bad choises that will mark his life for ever like the desicion to consum drugs or to make a tatto, or the sex thing, the teeagers think that they are preparated to have a girfriend and have sex, but they don´t know the consecuence of having sex and the responsability. The sex is related with the physical aspects that the teenagers deal. In this phase they will feel sexual atraction for other persons and this is because the hormones are developing so the teeagaer will need to have a good education to fight whith this. There are other physical aspects like the height and the muscle mass. For this too aspects the teeager think that they are prepared to face big situations and responsabilities, but aren´t and they would make mistakes in the decision making. So the teeagers needs to be prepared to the physical and psychological aspects that will affect in the decisions to take.

Writing Activity 2

Write a paragraph explaining the physical and psychological factors that affect teens and the choices they make.

Correction 2: Oral Presentation 1

The drugs is a serious problem nowadays in the teenagers, but why do teenagers use drugs? Is it for acceptance in a group, for rebellion, or a lot of pressure in the school or university. The drug use is closely related to the friends that the teenagers have. It is common that in the school or universities there are groups that consume drugs and if some students don´t have any friends, because they aren´tvery sociable, or are new students, they will try to make friends no matter what. So maybe they will try out things like alcohol, cigarettes, marijuana, or cocaine, just to get along with a group of friends. The rebellion in the teenagers is so common, the teenagers think that they are adults with a lot of experience and that they have the reason in all. So they break the rules and don´t respect the authority. These are the reasons why teenagers use drugs: to break the rules of the parents and the society to feel independent and free. The other reason that the teenagers use drugs is that they have a lot of pressure in the school or university with exams, works, rpojects and stuff. The drugs that the students consider calm the nerves are the cigarette and the marijuana. THe seniors in the school have a lot of work in the senior year, so they use the cigarette and the marijuana to be calmed and have a relaxation time in the midst of so much stress. They can become addicts to use these drugs and screw up their senior year in the school. The problem of the drug use is not the drug itself, but it is the sum of problems that teenagers will face in their lives like; acceptance in a group, rebellion and the pressure in the school or university because of too much work.

Review

The drugs is a serious problem nowadays in the teenagers, but why do teenagers use drugs? Is it for acceotance(acceptance) in a group, for rebellion, or a lor(lot) of pressure in the school or university. THe(The) drug use is closely related to the friends that the teenagers have. It is common that in the schools or universities there are groups that consume drugs and if some students don´t have any friends, because they aren't very sociable, or are new students, they will try to make friends no matter what. So maybe they will try out things like alcohol, cigarettes, marijuana, or cocaine, just to get along with a group of friends. The rebellion in the teenagers is so common, the teenagers think that they are (a) adults with a lot of esperiences(experience) and that they have the reason in all. So they break the rules and don´t respect the authority. These are the reasons why teenagers use drugs: to break the rules of the parents and the society to feel independent and free. THe(The) other reason that the teenagers use drugs is that they have a lot of pressure in the school or university with exams, works, projects and stuff. The drugs that the stedents(students) consider calm the nerves are the cigarette and the marijuana. The seniors in the school have a lot of work in the senior year, so they can tey(use) the cigarette and the marijuana to be calmed and have a relaxation time in the midst of so much stress. They can become addicts to use these drugs and screw up they(their) senior year in the school. The problem of the drug use is not the drug itself, but it si(is) the sum of problems that teenagers will face in their lives like; acceptance in a group, rebellion and the pressure in the school or university because of too much work.

Correction 1: Oral Presentation 1

The drugsis a serious problem nowadays in the teenagers, but why do teenagers use drugs? Is it for acceotance in a group, for rebellion, or a lor of pressure in the school or university. THe drug use is closely related to the friends that the teenagers have. It is common that in the schools or universities there are groups that consume drugs and if some students don´t have any friends, because they aren´t very sociable, or are new students, they will try to make friends no matter what. So maybe they will try out things like alcohol, cigarettes, marijuana, or cocaine, just to get along with a group of friends. The rebellion in the teenagers is so common, the teenagers think that they are a adults with a lot of esperiences and that they have the reason in all. So they break the rules and don´t respect the authority. These are the reasons why teenagers use drugs: to break the rules of the parents and the society to feel independent and free. THe other reason that the teenagers use drugs is that they have a lot of pressure in the school or university with exams, works, projects and stuff. The drugs that the stedents consider calm the nerves are the cigarette and the marijuana. The seniors in the school have a lot of work in the senior year, so they can tey the cigarette and the marijuana to be calmed and have a relaxation time in the midst of so much stress. They can become addicts to use these drugs and screw up they senior year in the school. The problem of the drug use is not the drug itself, but it si the sum of problems that teenagers will face in their lives like; acceptance in a group, rebellion and the pressure in the school or university because of too much work.

Review

The drugs use are(is) a serious problem nowadays in the teenagers, but why (do) teenagers use drugs? (Is it)for acceptance in a group, for reballion(rebellion), or because they have a lot of pressure in the school or university. The drug use is closely related to the friends that have the teenagers (have). (It is)Is common that in the schools or university(universities there are) have groups that consume drugs and if some student(students) don´t have any friends, because itsn´t(they aren't) very sociable, or is a(are) new student(students), he(they) will trying(try) to make friends no matter what. So maybe they (will try) test out things like alcohol, cigarretes(cigarettes), marihuana(marijuana), (or) cocaine, etc. (just to)To get along with a group of friends. The rebellion in the teenagers is so common, the teenagers think that they are a adults with a lot of experiences and that they have the reason in all. So they breake(break) the rules and don´t respect the authority. This(These) are a(the reasons why) reason that the teenagers use drugs(,)(:) to breake(break) the rules of the parents and the society for(to) feel independent and liberals(free). The other reason that the teenagers use drugs is that (they) have a lot of pressure in the school or university with exams, works, proyects(projects) and stuff. The druf(drugs) that the students consider for calm the nerves is(are) the cigarrete(cigarette) and the marihuana(marijuana). The seniors in the school have a lor(lot) of work in the seiors(senior) years, so they can try the cigarrete(cigarette) and the marihuana(marijuana) to be calm(calmed) and have a relaxation time in the midst of so much stress. They can become addicts ro(to) use this(these) drugs and screw up they senior year in the school. The problem of the drugs(drug) use is not the drug (itself but), it is the (sum of) problems that has the teenagers (will face) in hers(their lives like) lifes; acceptance in a group, the rebellion and the pressure in the school or university because (of too) much work.