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Correction 3: The Effects of Smoking

Health advocates around the world say that the toxic ingredients in cigaratte smoke that travel throughout the body like nicotine and carbon monoxide, are very dangerous and cause death. The Nicotine emited affects your immune system and may increase the risk for respiratory problems and rots your lungs then you die. Carbon monoxide also causes different kinds of cancers, like lung, mouth, and stomach cancer. Carbon monoxide is so dangerous it also causes respiratory tract infections like pneumania ans chronic bronchitis. For these ingredients on the cigarette is why now the cigarette is banned in many places.

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Health advocates around the worls(world) say that the toxic ingredients in cigaratte smoke that travel throughout the body like nicotine and carbon monoxide, are very dangerous and cause death. The Nicotine emited affects your immune sistem(system) and may increase the risk for respiratory (???????) and rots your lungs then you die. Carbon monoxide also causes different kinds of cancers, like lung, mouth, and stomach cancer. Carbon monoxide is so dangerous it also causes respiratory trac(tract) infections like pneumania and chronic bronchitis. For these ingredients on the cigarrete is why now the cigarette is banned in many places.

Correction 2: The Effects of Smoking

Health advocates around the worls say that the toxic ingredients in cigaratte smoke that travel throughout the body like nicotine and carbon monoxide, are very dangerous and cause death. The Nicotine emited affects your immune sistem and may increase the risk for respiratory and rots your lungs then you die. Carbon monoxide also causes different kinds of cancers, like lung, mouth, and stomach cancer. Carbon monoxide is so dangerous it also causes respiratory trac infections like pneumania and chronic bronchitis. For these ingredients on the cigarrete is why now the cigarette is banned in many places.