Paper 2 Activity 2

Guatemala September 6th 2011

Dear Luis:

Hello Luis, how are you doing? I hope that you are fine. It has been long time since we last talked. You never finished telling me what happened with the problem with your girlfriend. Could you solve it? We need to get together to catch up. The reason why I’m writing you is because your sister told my sister that you have serious problems with the IB program because your best friend was diagnosed cancer. I know that it is a hard situation that also affects your IB scores but you don´t need to drop out from everything. I can give you some tips to handle this situation and to start your first year of the IB program.

You need to understand that the cancer of your friend is something that is out of your hands. I understand that you are in depression; this depression affects your classes. The cancer can be controlled, so you need to be positive and cheerful because your friend needs it. You need to give support to your friend and I think that your friend needs you with a good mood in this days to handle the cancer. Your mood can have an influence in your friend, accordingly if you have a positive or negative mood.


In your first year of the IB program my first advice is that you need to select the subjects in superior level that you find easier because the subjects in superior level are more difficult than the ones in the other level. You can choose subjects in standard level that you don’t like or you are not very good. One important thing is that you need to realize that you will spend a lot of time studying and enormous amounts of hours working. Don´t freak out of this, you only need to organize yourself, and you need to do a schedule. With your schedule you will finish all your projects and works in time and you will have time to study for the exams. The key of this is to be organized because the projects and laboratories are not actually very difficult, you only need to have the time and dedication to do them. The benefit of doing this is that you will feel comfortable delivering everything on time without any concern or pressure. But the most important is that your will prepared to the university because you will develop the ability to organize yourself to do the works in the university and also in your life.

I hope that this advice can help you in your IB program; if you take this advice I guarantee you that the IB will be easier. And I hope that your friend continues to be better. I am sure that you will know how to support him.

Sincerely yours,

Danilo De Leon Coosemans

Paper 2 Activity 2

Guatemala September 6th 2011

Dear Luis:

Hello Luis, how are you doing? I hope that you are fine. It has been long time since we last talked. You never finished telling me what happened with the problem with your girlfriend. Could you solve it? We need to get together to catch up. The reason why I’m writing you is because your sister told my sister that you have serious problems with the IB program because your best friend was diagnosed cancer. I know that it is a hard situation that also affects your IB scores but you don´t need to drop out from everything. I can give you some tips to handle this situation and to start your first year of the IB program.


My first advice is that you need to select the subjects in superior level that you find easier because the subjects in superior level are more difficult than the ones in the other level. You can choose subjects in standard level that you don’t like or you are not very good. One important thing is that you need to realize that you will spend a lot of time studying and enormous amounts of hours working. Don´t freak out of this, you only need to organize yourself, and you need to do a schedule. With your schedule you will finish all your projects and works in time and you will have time to study for the exams. The key of this is to be organized because the projects and laboratories are not actually very difficult, you only need to have the time and dedication to do them. The benefit of doing this is that you will feel comfortable delivering everything on time without any concern or pressure. But the most important is that your will prepared to the university because you will develop the ability to organize yourself to do the works in the university and also in your life.

I hope that this advice can help you in your IB program; if you take this advice I guarantee you that the IB will be easier. And I hope that your friend continues to be better. I am sure that you will know how to support him.

Sincerely yours,

Danilo De Leon Coosemans

Review

Guatemala September 6th 2011

Dear Luis:

Hello Luis, how are you doing? I hope that you are fine. It has been long time since we last talked. You never finish(finished) to tell(telling) me what happen(happened) with the problem with your girlfriend. Could you solve it? We need to get together to catch up. The reason why I’m writing you is because your sister told to my sister that you have serious problem(problems) with the IB program because your best friend was diagnosed cancer. I know that (it) is a hard situation and(that) also affects your IB scores but you don´t need to drop out (from everything)all. I can give you some tips to star( handle this situation and to start) your first year of the IB program. 

Paragraph about handling the situation?

Me(My) first advice is that you need to select the subjects in superior level that you make(find) more easier because the subjects in superior level are more difficult than the (ones in the) other levels(level). If you have made your choice you can make some changes in your program subjects. This is an important decision because you(You) can choose subjects in superior(standard) level that you don’t like or you are not much(very) good(,)(.) and other subjects that you like and you are good in a normal level or medium for example. This will give you an idea of what you will go to study at the university because you will know in what you are good. One important thing is that you need to realize that you will spend a lot of time studying and another enormous (amounts of) hours working. Don´t freak out of this, you only need to organize yourself, and you need to do a schedule. With your schedule you will finish all your projects and works in time and you will have time to study for the exams. The key of this is been(to be) organized because the project(projects and)(,) laboratories are not actually very difficult, you only need to have the time and dedication to do it(them). The benefit of doing this is that you will feel comfortable delivering everything on time without any concern or pressure. But the most important is that your will prepared to the university because you will might develop the ability to organize yourself to do the works in the university and also in your life.

I hope that this advice can help you in your IB program(,)(;) if you take this advice I guarantee you that the IB will more easily(be easier). And I hope that your friend continues to (be) better(.) health and I know(am sure) that you will know how to support it(him). 

Sincerely you:(yours,)

Danilo De Leon Coosemans

Paper 2 Activity 2

Guatemala September 6th 2011

Dear Luis:

Hello Luis, how are you doing? I hope that you are fine. It has been long time since we last talked. You never finish to tell me what happen with the problem with your girlfriend. Could you solve it? We need to get together to catch up. The reason why I’m writing you is because your sister told to my sister that you have serious problem with the IB program because your best friend was diagnosed cancer. I know that is a hard situation and also affects your IB scores but you don´t need to drop out all. I can give you some tips to star your first year of the IB program.

Me first advice is that you need to select the subjects in superior level that you make more easier because the subjects in superior level are more difficult than the other levels. If you have made your choice you can make some changes in your program subjects. This is an important decision because you can choose subjects in superior level that you don’t like or you are not much good, and other subjects that you like and you are good in a normal level or medium for example. This will give you an idea of what you will go to study at the university because you will know in what you are good.

One important thing is that you need to realize that you will spend a lot of time studying and another enormous hours working. Don´t freak out of this, you only need to organize yourself, and you need to do a schedule. With your schedule you will finish all your projects and works in time and you will have time to study for the exams. The key of this is been organized because the project, laboratories are not actually very difficult, you only need to have the time and dedication to do it. The benefit of doing this is that you will feel comfortable delivering everything on time without any concern or pressure. But the most important is that your will prepared to the university because you will might develop the ability to organize yourself to do the works in the university and also in your life.

I hope that this advice can help you in your IB program, if you take this advice I guarantee you that the IB will more easily. And I hope that your friend continues to better health and I know that you will know how to support it.

Sincerely you:

Danilo De Leon Coosemans

Review

Guatemala September 6th 2011

Dear Luis:

Hello Luis, how are you going(doing)? I hope that you are fine. It has been long time since we last talked. You don´t(never) finish too(to) tell me(,) what happen with the problem with your girlfriend(?)(.) (Could you)You can solve it? We need to get together to catch up. The reason why I’m writing you is because your sister told to my sister that you have serious problem with the IB program (because your girlfried dumped you???? Your dad lost his job????? Your mom has cancer?????)(I know this situation is difficult and also affects your IB scores but I can give you some tips to overcome it.), to be more specific, with your TOK´s essay. Do you know that I am in the same program? I can give you some advices(advice) with your essay, I have been worked(working) in my essay (for) 7 moths so I have some tips that I can shared(share) with you. 

Paragraph describing the situation.

Paragraph giving advice.

Conlusion: (The good bye paragraph)

Theory of Knowledge is a requirement that you need to course to get the diploma, but this material make you think using all the classes you have in your school. You will know the role of the knowledge in the world, the influence and the importance that knowledge have in our life. I´m toll you this because you need to realize how much important is TOK in the education. The TOK’s essay is and essay about a specific title that the IB give to you, you can choose one. Whatever you choose, each title raises generic cross-disciplinary questions about knowledge, so you need to write to answer the question.

To answer this question in a good way and to get an A in the score, you will need to do some requirements. First of all in your essay you need to talk about one or two ways of knowledge, there are only four; sense perception, reason, emotion and language. The most of the time the title give to you the way of knowledge, but it is important to you know it. Second you need to response the title question with an others question of knowledge. This questions need to be related with the title because the development of these questions will help you answer the question of the tittle, is good to use at least four of this question of knowledge. Then when you will development the questions you need to support your ideas with examples and your examples need to be focus in one of the areas of knowledge. There are 6 areas of knowledge; mathematics, natural sciences, human sciences, history, the arts and ethics. It is recommendable to use at least 4 areas of knowledge, because this is the way that you will prove that you know. And other way to support your ideas is making citations of an investigation or book that support what you are saying, always using some areas of knowledge. Finally the conclusion, you need conclude with the answer of the question using what you write in the beginning.

So that are the advices that I know about TOK’s essay, I hope to help you in something and if you need more help send me your essay and I will see what I can do.

Sincerely you:

Danilo De Leon.

Paper 2 Activity 2

Guatemala September 6th 2011

Dear Luis:

Hello Luis, how are you going? I hope that you are fine. It has been long time since we last talked. You don´t finish too tell me, what happen with the problem with your girlfriend? You can solve it? We need to get together to catch up. The reason why I’m writing you is because your sister told to my sister that you have serious problem with the IB program, to be more specific, with your TOK´s essay. Do you know that I am in the same program? I can give you some advices with your essay, I have been worked in my essay 7 moths so I have some tips that I can shared with you.

Theory of Knowledge is a requirement that you need to course to get the diploma, but this material make you think using all the classes you have in your school. You will know the role of the knowledge in the world, the influence and the importance that knowledge have in our life. I´m toll you this because you need to realize how much important is TOK in the education. The TOK’s essay is and essay about a specific title that the IB give to you, you can choose one. Whatever you choose, each title raises generic cross-disciplinary questions about knowledge, so you need to write to answer the question.

To answer this question in a good way and to get an A in the score, you will need to do some requirements. First of all in your essay you need to talk about one or two ways of knowledge, there are only four; sense perception, reason, emotion and language. The most of the time the title give to you the way of knowledge, but it is important to you know it. Second you need to response the title question with an others question of knowledge. This questions need to be related with the title because the development of these questions will help you answer the question of the tittle, is good to use at least four of this question of knowledge. Then when you will development the questions you need to support your ideas with examples and your examples need to be focus in one of the areas of knowledge. There are 6 areas of knowledge; mathematics, natural sciences, human sciences, history, the arts and ethics. It is recommendable to use at least 4 areas of knowledge, because this is the way that you will prove that you know. And other way to support your ideas is making citations of an investigation or book that support what you are saying, always using some areas of knowledge. Finally the conclusion, you need conclude with the answer of the question using what you write in the beginning.

So that are the advices that I know about TOK’s essay, I hope to help you in something and if you need more help send me your essay and I will see what I can do.

Sincerely you:

Danilo De Leon.