Review

The teenagers(Teenagers) are affected by physical and psychological aspects in decision making.
(This is controlling idea 2, where is controlling idea 1?)The psychological aspects that affect the teenagers is(are) that the teenagers are going through a phase of trying new things (curiosity) and rebellion.
(This is controlling idea 2.2, where is controlling idea 2.1?) The rebellion of the teenagers are(happens) because they think that they know all the things and that they have the reason. But the tru(truth) is that they don´t know how the real world is. They can make bad decisions because they think that (they) are prepared(;) they think that (they) are people with experience. They can make bad choises(choices) that will mark his(their) life(lives) for ever like the desicion(decision) to consum(consume) drugs or to make a tatto(tattoo), or the sex thing, the teeagers(teenagers) think that they are preparated(prepared) to have a girfriend(girlfriend) and have sex, but they don´t know the consecuence(consequence) of having sex and the responsability(responsibility it conveys). The sex is related with the physical aspects that the teenagers deal. In this phase they will feel sexual atraction(attraction) for other persons and this is because the hormones are developing so the teeagaer(teenagers) will need to have a good education to fight whith(with) this. (This is controlling idea 1)There are other physical aspects like the height and the muscle mass. For this too(two) aspects the teeager(teenagers) think that they are prepared to face big situations and responsabilities(responsibilities), but (they) aren´t and they would(will) make mistakes in the decision making.(/I think this needs more explanation.) So the teeagers needs(need) to be prepared to(for) the physical and psychological aspects that will affect (them) in the(their decision) decisions to take(taking).