Correction 1: Internal Evaluation

The messages that convey Americans music videos to their viewers.

Nowadays the music videos are used to transmit messages to the people, but these messages aren´t educational. The music videos can have influence in American people, specially in the teenagers because they are going through a phase of trying new things and rebellion. The music videos show violence, drugs, sex and partying all the time. The American people are trying to be like the music stars because these stars represent the success because they are in a good place without any problem (seemingly). So when the people watch their favorite music star in a video with a gun and it seems like all the people respect them, the viewers will want that the people respect them too so they will buy a gun and maybe they will shoot someone who disrespects them. The music videos show that the violence is the only way to solve the problems but that is not the real life, the violence in the US is a serious problem. The music videos are like the movies; you kill someone and no one notes this is fake but the viewers catch this message. The use of drugs is another message of the music videos, the videos of hip-hop, electronic,and techno, show tha the use of drugs is cool. It´s the same thing like in the violence, the music stars appear in the videos consuming drugs, drinking alcohol and it seems like they are having a good thing, everybody has a good time, but in the real life the drugs destroy you; the alcohol too and it isn´t a good way to have a good time. The people don´t know this, the American people only want to be like the stars in the videos, and they don’t see the consequences of acting like in the music videos. The is the same situation, the music videos convey having sex with everybody it´s a cool thing and all the people do it. If you don´t have sex you're nobody, that is the messages that the music videos convey. The sex is a big problem in American society; the diseases are very easy to get through sex and these diseases can kill. But this is one part of the problem of having sex, the other part is pregnancy. Many young women’s needs to leave the school and stars work because they have a baby and they need to keep. Maybe it was just a moment of madness and satisfaction at a party, only sex without feelings, but this sex at the party brings a baby and responsibilities to the women and the men. The music videos messages is in part responsible that the American society have many people that consume drugs, that have a lot of violence and that many people are infected with a diseases sex and the reason that many teenagers women get pregnant. Because shows that the violence, drugs and sex are something enjoyable, pleasurable; something that is fashionable but is a fantasy life.